[She has noticed, but still, it is lovely, wonderful to hear it. To know that he wants her, a much as she wants him. She looks up at him, and her iris is huge, inky and dark. She takes a breath, and takes her skirt and unties the laces on the side, and puts his hands on them.]
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[She has noticed, but still, it is lovely, wonderful to hear it. To know that he wants her, a much as she wants him. She looks up at him, and her iris is huge, inky and dark. She takes a breath, and takes her skirt and unties the laces on the side, and puts his hands on them.]
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